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- I am from Egypt , I know little English as I learn it in my school .
- I want to be good in English because this will help me in my study.

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句子 1
- I am from Egypt , I know little English as I learn it in my school .
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- I am from Egypt ~~, I know little English~~. My English is not really good, as I learn it in my school .
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- I am from Egypt , so I know little English as I learn it in my school .
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- I am from Egypt , so I know little English ~~as I~~but I'm learning it in my school .
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句子 2
- I want to be good in English because this will help me in my study.
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- I want to ~~be good in~~improve my English because it~~his~~ will help me inwith my studyies.
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