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- I really hate summer
- I really really hate summer because I hate hot..
- Actually I love winter and want to go to alaska I hope quickly pass summer

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- I really hate summer
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- I really hate summer.
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- I really really hate summer because I hate hot..
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- I really really hate summer¶¶ because I hate ~~hot~~the hotness..
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- I really, really hate summer¶¶ because I hate hothe heat..
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- Actually I love winter and want to go to alaska I hope quickly pass summer
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- Actually, I love winter and want to go to aAlaska.¶¶I hope ~~quickly pass summer ¶¶~~summer passes by quickly.
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