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LauriTaz szövege - English

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- Hello, my name is Laura, today at school I had a international fair, every class had to represent a country, my country was USA, and we had costumes, food, music, we talked about history.
- It was amazing and I traveld around the world in one hour.

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KÉRLEK, SEGÍTS KIJAVÍTANI MINDEN MONDATOT! - English

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Mondat 1
- Hello, my name is Laura, today at school I had a international fair, every class had to represent a country, my country was USA, and we had costumes, food, music, we talked about history.
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- Hello~~, m~~! My name is Laura~~, t~~. Today at school ~~I had~~was an international fair~~, every class had to~~. Each class represented a country~~, m~~. My country was ~~USA, and w~~the USA. We had costumes, food,s, and music~~, w~~. We talked about history.
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- Hello~~, m~~. My name is Laura~~, t~~. Today at school I, we had an international fair~~, e~~. Every class had to represent a country~~, m~~. My country was USA, and we had costumes, food, music, and we talked about history.
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1
Mondat 2
- It was amazing and I traveld around the world in one hour.
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- It was amazing and I traveled around the world in one hour.
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2