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  • The good life

    • Last time I had the chance to go to an Agricultural Exhibition.
  • It was amazing!
    • It was Sunday morning and the sun warmed with its light the square and everything was calmly.
  • My eyes were filled with so much beauty to see all products produced by nature; huge, colorful and fresh vegetables, fresh cheese and yogurt already made, beauty natural product like shampoo, bath soap, body cream, tea and coffee...the delicious coffee of the high mountains of my country!...It was impossible not to have a happy heart!
  • I love honey, so I noticed that there was some people who sell it.
  • One of them explained me that they are coffee producers and raise bees as well.
  • When is not time to harvest coffee, bees produce honey by cane and coffee flower!
  • In this way, the company takes advantage of the natural resources they already have besides supporting to their workers to prevent migration in this season as well as sustain the economy of both, the company and the families which work there.
  • As this enterprise, I noticed that all the people there, work as a real community, I talked with them, and they explained me that though some people grow vegetables or fruits, others harvest honey or coffee, others made cheesee or potatoe atol!, there is not a sense of competition for get more money for becoming reach, this is not the goal; they help each other as a big family, by taking care of the natural resources they have for living.
    • That was beautiful because you don't see that in the city, I love this way for living, and it made me think that we got a better word if everyone lived as a community, doing what each one of us do but thinking to benefit everyone, not just yourself, not just for feeding your ego, how wonderful would be the world if we really work together like this simple and good people I met that day!

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    • My eyes were filled with so much beauty to see all products produced by nature; huge, colorful and fresh vegetables, fresh cheese and yogurt already made, beauty natural product like shampoo, bath soap, body cream, tea and coffee...the delicious coffee of the high mountains of my country!...It was impossible not to have a happy heart!
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    • In this way, the company takes advantage of the natural resources they already have besides supporting to their workers to prevent migration in this season as well as sustain the economy of both, the company and the families which work there.
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    • As this enterprise, I noticed that all the people there, work as a real community, I talked with them, and they explained me that though some people grow vegetables or fruits, others harvest honey or coffee, others made cheesee or potatoe atol!, there is not a sense of competition for get more money for becoming reach, this is not the goal; they help each other as a big family, by taking care of the natural resources they have for living.
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    • That was beautiful because you don't see that in the city, I love this way for living, and it made me think that we got a better word if everyone lived as a community, doing what each one of us do but thinking to benefit everyone, not just yourself, not just for feeding your ego, how wonderful would be the world if we really work together like this simple and good people I met that day!
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    • That was beautiful because you don't see that in the city, I love this way forof living(this lifestyle ), and it made me think that we got a better word if everyone lived as a community, doing what each one of us do but thinking to benefit everyone, not just yourself, not just for feeding your ego, how wonderful would be the world if we really work together like this simple and good people I met that day!
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