Corrections

Text from Ignacio777 - English

  • places, people

  • -There are places where one wants to be because he feels a special energy.
  • -There are places that would not ever: give me fear.
  • -When it comes to the house of Mary saw her beautiful carpet, armchairs, table for a meal and, of course, in the yard for a beautiful garden.
  • -The man who greeted me in the cafeteria was high, attractive and with a few whiskers enoarmes.
  • - My sister has the long hair, it is careful, comb every day.
  • -On the other hand, my brother is always messy and dirty, he says he does not like bathing.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English