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  • TRAVELLING BY PLANE OR BY BUS

    • There are some similarities between travelling by plane and by bus.
    • First of all, you usually buy a ticket at the same price.
    • For example; while bus ticket from Adana to İstanbul is 70TL, flight ticket might be approximately 60-80TL.
    • Also airports and coach stations are usually too far to the centre of the town.
    • Both airway and bus companies take you from some places with their services before travelling so it is very useful for some people who do not have a car.
    • Besides while you are travelling by plane or by bus, they service you some foods or drinks such as pastry, cola, cake, tea, fruit juice and so on..
    • There are diffrent aspects as well as similiar aspects between travelling by plane and by bus.
    • The most significant difference is in time of journey by plane saves your time.
  • For example, you can travel in half an hour by plane from İstanbul to Adana whereas it takes about 13 hours by bus.
    • If you travel by bus, your all day is dead.
  • You are very exhausted after travelling by bus.
  • In addition, they differ in terms of safety.
    • Sometimes some places might fell down but it does not mean that plane is dangerous.
    • While the risk of dying is 1 in 18 thousand in a traffic accident, the risk of dying is 1 in 10.4 million in a plane crash.

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