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  • Saturday on a small island.

    • On Saturday afternoon Bobby, Mag and their dad were swimming in the sea on their boat.
    • In front of was a beautiful island.
    • They landed on the beach and dragged a boat on the send.
  • There were trees behind the beach.
    • There were monkeys in the trees.
    • Between the trees and a sea were black rocks.
    • Mag looked in rock pool.
    • There were three little fish and one big red crab.
    • Bobby was in the beach next to his dad.
  • It was hot and sunny day.
  • The sea was blue.
  • Bobby: Can I swim, dad?
    • Dad: No, look that.
    • There is a black fen in the water.
    • Bobby: Was it a shark?
    • When fish jumped out in the water.
    • It wasn't a shark.
  • It was a beautiful dolphin.

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