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    • Last week,a shoplifter went to the department store on 526 le duan street.
    • A shoplifter is a girl.she is just 15 years old.she stole three new mp3 from this department store.unfortunately,the asistant saw her stole them.as soon as,the assistant called the police.the police immediately arrested a shoplifter .however ,a shoplifter is 15year old,so she only paid 3 new mp3 and she had to guarantee that don't again.
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    • A shoplifter is a girl.she is just 15 years old.she stole three new mp3 from this department store.unfortunately,the asistant saw her stole them.as soon as,the assistant called the police.the police immediately arrested a shoplifter .however ,a shoplifter is 15year old,so she only paid 3 new mp3 and she had to guarantee that don't again.
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    • AThe shoplifter is a girl.s She is just 15 years old.s She stole three new mp3s from this department store.u Unfortunately, the assistant saw her stoleeal them.a As soon as, the assistant called the police.t The police immediately arrested athe shoplifter .h. However ,a, the shoplifter is 15 years old, so she only paid 3for the three new mp3s and she had to guarantee thatnot to don' it again.
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