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- Hi, my Name is lorenza and Now i'm in bournemouth, in England.
- But i Live in Rome and i would like to meet English People Who Live there And that want to Learn italian! I'm 17!
- Write me at this email: lorenza.fiaschetti@gmail.com see you soon!

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- Hi, my Name is lorenza and Now i'm in bournemouth, in England.
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- Hi, my Nname is lLorenza and Nnow iI'm in bBournemouth, in England.
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- But i Live in Rome and i would like to meet English People Who Live there And that want to Learn italian! I'm 17!
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- But ~~i L~~I live in Rome and iI would like to meet English Ppeople Wwho Llive there Aand that want to Llearn iItalian! I'm 17!
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- ~~But i L~~I used to live in Rome ~~and i~~. I would like to meet English Ppeople Wwho Llive there Aand ~~that~~ want to Llearn iItalian! I'm 17!
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- Write me at this email: lorenza.fiaschetti@gmail.com see you soon!
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- Write me at this email: lorenza.fiaschetti@gmail.com s- See you soon!
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