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Teenagers and Internet
One study said that many teenagers spend too much time online.
- I belive that they don't spend this time doping useful activities that they help them work, socialisme and relax.
- Second more studies in different schools, students who use Internet regularly, they think their schoolwork suffer and they are missing out on their social Life.
- However, students are more relaxed without Internet, because they have much more Free time.

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- Teenagers and Internet
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- One study said that many teenagers spend too much time online.
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Satz 2
- I belive that they don't spend this time doping useful activities that they help them work, socialisme and relax.
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- I believe that they don't spend this time doping useful activities that ~~they~~ help them work, socialismze and relax.
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- Second more studies in different schools, students who use Internet regularly, they think their schoolwork suffer and they are missing out on their social Life.
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- Second, with more studies in different schools, students who use Internet regularly~~, they~~ think their schoolwork suffers and they are missing out on their social Life.
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- However, students are more relaxed without Internet, because they have much more Free time.
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- However, students are more relaxed without Internet, because they have much more Ffree time.
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