添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

elreadからのテキスト - English

  • An escape

  • There are mountains below and the sky overhead.
  • She has been in between and she has been flying.
  • One moment ago she was just a big bird who hunted on a mouse.
  • Now, it become she who has changed the direction and increased the speed.
  • She hasn't known what was happen and why.
  • But one thing has been in her mind: to be on time.
  • So the large wings turned at the new form and the huge eagle flung herself at her aim.
  • Water was all around.
  • A shore was too far.
  • There was a man in the center of the mountain lake.
  • A whirlpool has been appeared ten minutes ago.
  • The men has fought with a stream but he has known that he won't win.
  • He has managed to awake the mind of the beautiful creature.
  • Then he has sent to her his ask for help.
  • After a while the black spot appeared in the sky.
  • She wasn't going to late.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English