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  • eurovision

    • Lately, ı was bored at home and while ı thinking of what can ı do, an idea comes my mind suddenly.I opened the computer and ı started to watch Eurovision song contest 2015.(Turkey doesn't join this contest, because of biased voting.But we were first of 2008.)So, ı liked the fourth song, it was "rhytim inside". the first song, "Heroes" is so beautiful too.
    • I like listening to music so much, so ı will glad if you can suggest me from your favorite song. :)

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