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    • My few days of vacancy

    • A few day ago I visited the South of France.
    • My first discovery is Nice, I love this city because there is a good atmosphere and people are smiling.
    • The old Nice is particularly pleasant and the traders particularly welcoming.
    • The next day I went to the park who called "Marineland" it's not a first time but it's always a goo idea because to see the show of dolphins as always, it's wonderful.
    • The last day I definitely feel sad, tomorrow I shall be at my home without the sea, without gulls and without sun.
    • After I put my suitcase in the car, I go to Cannes for a last visit.
    • In Cannes the luxury is a king, there are tons of store of marks like "Channel" or "Dior".
    • Having I put roasted eyes to be looked at things outside my ways.
    • I end my sandwitch delicious, a last look towards the sea and its boat.
  • Last step in the sand and I go back towards the car.
    • I look at the paraded landscapes, far off there is one last one palm tree, time passes, the house approaches.
    • The end of the rest and holidays rang.
    • It's only a goodbye see you soon the South !

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