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  • letter to Tom

  • Dear Tom, Thank you for your letter.
  • Sorry for not having written to you earlier but I was very busy at school.
    • Congratulations on getting the second prize.
  • I’m sure that your movie was very interesting and impressive.
  • In your last letter you asked me about the importance of recording family history.
    • In my opinion it is quite interesting because you can get a lot of new facts about history of your family.
  • It can be very useful for next generations to know about their roots.
  • I think that children and grandchildren must make recordings of some important events that happened to their parents and just collect them and then make a full movie for descendants.
    • So that using photos, short videos and some other materials you can make a fantastic film.
  • You wrote me that you are preparing for your mother’s birthday. Great!
  • Do you have any ideas about what to give her as a present?
  • Do you like to organize a party for her?
    • What do you think of making a picnic for her?
    • I have to do now I have a lot of business to do. Keep in touch!
  • All the best, Margaret.

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