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New York
New York is a beautiful city.
- I was in March 2012 in New York City for 8 days.
- Can you tell me questions about my trip to NY? i will answer in English an you correct me?

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- New York is a beautiful city.
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- I was in March 2012 in New York City for 8 days.
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- ~~I was~~ During March 2012 I was in New York City for 8 days. (In March 2012 I spent 8 days in New York)
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- ~~I was i~~On March 2012 I stayed in New York City for 8 days.
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- ~~I was i~~ On March 2012 I was in New York City for 8 days.
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- Can you tell me questions about my trip to NY? i will answer in English an you correct me?
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- Can you ~~tell~~ ask me some questions about my trip to NY? iI will answer in English and you can correct me?
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- Canould you ~~tell me~~ask me any questions about my trip to NY? i will answer in English ain ~~you~~order to be correct ~~me?~~ed.
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- ~~Can~~Would you ~~tell~~ask me questions about my trip to NY? iI will answer in English and you correct me?.
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- Can you tell me questions about my trip to NY? iI will answer in English ~~an you correct me~~but please correct any errors?
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- ~~Can~~If you ~~tell~~ask me questions about my trip to NY~~? i~~, I will answer in English, and could you correct me please?
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