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  • TASK 2

    • Introduction.
    • The aim of this report is to give my opinion of how to spend the available money to improve the facilities in our college.
    • Place to improve, the gym.
    • This space is small, not well ventilated and lighted; we are thirty of us in the class, sweating as we are a bit crowed.
  • The material we used, as mats, is used and broken-down.
    • The showers in the changing room have not pressure. Improvements.
    • I will change the blind windows for other that can be opened to have a better ventilation, about the light I would use led panels which not used much electricity but give more light up.
    • I will buy new material to replace the old ones and introduce new sports as Pilates, Boxing… As I talked with the other students we would like recommend to everybody to bring a towel to be used over the mats to care of the new material.
  • To conclude, without spending a lot of money the gym can be improved and with the cooperation of all the students the new material can be used for many more years.

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