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My Day
Today is the day I left home.
- I very long awaited this day because I missed my friends and family.
I will meet my dad.
And then we will go home together to eat with my mom.
- I'm looking forward.

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- Today is the day I left home.
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- I very long awaited this day because I missed my friends and family.
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- I ~~very long a~~have been waiteding this day for a very long time because I missed my friends and family.
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- I have waited a very long ~~awaited~~time for this day to come, because I missed my friends and family.
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- I will meet my dad.
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- And then we will go home together to eat with my mom.
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- I'm looking forward.
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- I'm looking forward. to it!
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