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- My skills today ))
Hey everybody!
- Now I'm start to tell you about my English skills today.
- I have started to learn English seriously when I was 21 years old.
- Why so late..hm maybe I have not interested so much like now.
- Maybe ours teachers didn't want to study us seriously ) So I decided to learn myself without teachers and special schools.
- I know that I have some mistakes in English but I am not stopped in it.
I need practice!
- When you are learning some languages its too important to have practice in writting and speaking. Thank you! ;)

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- My skills today ))
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- My skills today :))
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- Now I'm start to tell you about my English skills today.
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- Now I'm starting to tell you about my English skills today.
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- Now I'm will start to tell you about my English skills ~~today~~.
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- ~~Now I'm start to~~I'll tell you about my English skills today.
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- I have started to learn English seriously when I was 21 years old.
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- I ~~have~~ started to learning English seriously when I was 21 ~~years old~~.
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- Why so late..hm maybe I have not interested so much like now.
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- Why so late? hum...hm maybe I ~~have~~was not as interested ~~so much like~~as I am now.
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- Why so late~~..hm maybe I have~~? Perhaps I was not interested ~~so much like~~until now.
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- Maybe ours teachers didn't want to study us seriously ) So I decided to learn myself without teachers and special schools.
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- Maybe ours teachers didn't want to ~~study~~teach us seriously :) So I decided to learn by myself without any teacher~~s and~~ or special schools.
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- I know that I have some mistakes in English but I am not stopped in it.
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- I know that I ~~have som~~make mistakes in English but ~~I am not stopped in it~~this does not stop me.
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- When you are learning some languages its too important to have practice in writting and speaking. Thank you! ;)
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- When you are learning ~~some~~ languages it's too important to ~~have~~ practice in writting and speaking. Thank you! ;)
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