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    • This was my first experience working in an architectural firm.
    • I was able to use the knowledge acquired during their studies and make them available to the project activities carried out and acquire new valuable knowledge.
    • I was pleasantly surprised to find myself in a very positive that I was immediately put at ease and in a position to work the best.
    • Although the architects were committed to pursue other jobs and projects, I have always considered and followed in my path, adding to my duties to appropriate explanations and always making himself available for clarifications.
    • I therefore believe that this experience arises in a fundamental way, not only compared to my university education, but also personal.

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    • I was able to use the knowledge acquired during their studies and make them available to the project activities carried out and acquire new valuable knowledge.
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    • I was able to use the knowledge acquired during theirmy studies and makeapply them available to the project activities we carried out, ands well as acquire new and valuable knowledge.
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    • I was pleasantly surprised to find myself in a very positive that I was immediately put at ease and in a position to work the best.
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    • I was pleasantly surprised to find myself in a very positive thatenvironment, in which I was immediately put at ease and in a position to work theas best as I could.
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    • Although the architects were committed to pursue other jobs and projects, I have always considered and followed in my path, adding to my duties to appropriate explanations and always making himself available for clarifications.
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    • Although the architects were committed to pursue other jobs and projects, I have always considered and followed in my path, adding to my duties towith appropriate explanations and always making himyself available for clarifications.
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    • I therefore believe that this experience arises in a fundamental way, not only compared to my university education, but also personal.
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    • I therefore believe that this experience arispplies in a fundamental way, not only compared to my university education, but also personal.
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