添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Kat88からのテキスト - English

  • Try to write a story

    • He’s here, right in front of me.
    • His laugh sound through the room, and even though it’s mingle with those of my friends, I can differentiate its melody with disconcerting ease.
    • His blue eyes glitter with mischief, and stay focus on Candeece, with a wry smile.
    • He’s here, right in front of me.
    • Nearly, but then so far away.
    • It’s like he became a stranger.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English