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  • REVIEW

  • REVIEW OF THE NOVEL THE ALCHEMIST BY PAULO COELHO The spellbinding book the Alchemist of Paulo Coelho is a novel which was originally written in Portuguese, in 1998.
    • The content of the book is amazingly inspiring by its simplicity and wisdom was after all translated into 56 languages.
    • The novel discusses about a shepherd boy, from Andalusia whose name is Santiago. .
  • He is gasping for discovering the world and its treasures .Therefore, he decides to make a journey to the Egyptian dessert in order to find a treasure buried in the Pyramids.
  • Most of the chapters are devoted to the main plot in which the main character comes up against various, interesting people during his exciting travel.
  • Attention is also paid to the encounter with an elderly person – the Alchemist.
    • The Chapter 4 focuses on the meeting with the lone Alchemist who explicates him what the most greatest treasure in our lives is – find where your heart belongs (…).He emphasizes also that people want to find only the treasure of their Personal Legends but not the Personal Legend itself.
  • In spite of many problems which he encounters on his long journey, he never gives up and believes that his dream will come true.
  • The story of Santiago is an eternal testament to the transforming power of our dreams and the importance of listening to our hearts.
  • The last chapter of this novel concludes that you will achieve what you want as long as you have a genuine desire to get it.
    • Furthermore, The main motto of the book points out that impossible is nothing, but you must want it and you must try to achieve it yourself.
  • I found this book very succulent and I would strongly recommend it both to young and adult people.
    • The language of the novel is very simple, but at the same beautiful which for sure not only one person shed a tear because of emotion.
  • I was captivated by this story .
  • It is definitely not easy to put this novel down.
    • The novel “ Alchemist” is both absorbing and soul-stirring and also very quick to read, it contains 160 pages.

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    • REVIEW OF THE NOVEL THE ALCHEMIST BY PAULO COELHO The spellbinding book the Alchemist of Paulo Coelho is a novel which was originally written in Portuguese, in 1998.
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    • The content of the book is amazingly inspiring by its simplicity and wisdom was after all translated into 56 languages.
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    • The content of the book is amazingly inspiring byecause of its simplicity and wisdom - It was, after all, translated into 56 languages.
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    • He is gasping for discovering the world and its treasures .Therefore, he decides to make a journey to the Egyptian dessert in order to find a treasure buried in the Pyramids.
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    • Most of the chapters are devoted to the main plot in which the main character comes up against various, interesting people during his exciting travel.
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    • The Chapter 4 focuses on the meeting with the lone Alchemist who explicates him what the most greatest treasure in our lives is – find where your heart belongs (…).He emphasizes also that people want to find only the treasure of their Personal Legends but not the Personal Legend itself.
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    • The Chapter 4 focuses on the meeting with the lone Alchemist who explicatesains to him what the most greatest treasure in our lives is – finding where your heart belongs (…).He also emphasizses also that people only want to find only the treasure of their Personal Legends, but not the Personal Legend itself.
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    • In spite of many problems which he encounters on his long journey, he never gives up and believes that his dream will come true.
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    • The story of Santiago is an eternal testament to the transforming power of our dreams and the importance of listening to our hearts.
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    • Furthermore, The main motto of the book points out that impossible is nothing, but you must want it and you must try to achieve it yourself.
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    • Furthermore, The main motto of the book points out that impossible is nothingnothing is impossible, but you must want it and you must try to achieve it yourself.
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    • The language of the novel is very simple, but at the same beautiful which for sure not only one person shed a tear because of emotion.
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    • The language of the novel is very simple, but at the same time beautiful which for sure not only one person, and it is certain that many people have shed a tear because of the emotion.
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