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    • Toefl course in my friend's opinion is very boring and so many my friends that sleep in the class.
    • However, why does my friend say like that?, i think toefl lesson is very great for me, beside i learn english as well, i also learn how to make the good english written. because in this world, now it's time for learning english, the world won't wait you to be a good man, but you have to prepare it by yourself.
    • The world won't be hesitate with you :)

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    • However, why does my friend say like that?, i think toefl lesson is very great for me, beside i learn english as well, i also learn how to make the good english written. because in this world, now it's time for learning english, the world won't wait you to be a good man, but you have to prepare it by yourself.
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    • However, why does my friend say it like that?, i I think toeflTOEFL lesson iss are very great for me, b. Beside is that I learn eEnglish as well, iI also learn how to make thwrite good eEnglish written. bBecause in this world, now it's time forto learning e English, t. The world won't wait for you to be a good man, but you have to prepare it by yourself.
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    • HoweverBut, why does my friend say like that?, i think toeflTOEFL lesson is verys are great for me, beside i learn english as well, i also learn how to make the good english written. because icause I learn how to speak and write English well. In this world, now it's time forportant to learning e English, the world won't- no one will wait for you to be a goodcome an intelligent man, butso you have tomust prepare it byfor life yourself.
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