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- I wake up at 5.30 am or 5.00 am and then pray I take a shower and get dressed and having breakfast .
- I have class on tuesday-saturday .
- I have free time on monday and sunday .
- But i took an english course on monday and friday .. sometimes i went to bookstore to buy english book like children books to learn english .
- And i spent my time after college to chill out with my friends like lunch or dinner .
- And in the evening im online and i was watching youtube channel looking at interview in english or looking at my favorite actress/actor video in the west or watching a movies i like.

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- I wake up at 5.30 am or 5.00 am and then pray I take a shower and get dressed and having breakfast .
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- I wake up at 5.:30 am or 5.:00 am and then I pray¶. Afterwards, I take a shower ~~and~~, get dressed and hav~~ing~~e breakfast .
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- I have class on tuesday-saturday .
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- I have class ~~on t~~es from Tuesday-sSaturday .
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- I have free time on monday and sunday .
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- I have free time on mMondays and sSunday s.
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- But i took an english course on monday and friday .. sometimes i went to bookstore to buy english book like children books to learn english .
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- But i t~~ook~~ake an english course on monday and friday .. sometimes i ~~went to~~go to the bookstore tofor buying english book ~~like~~such as child~~ren~~ books to learn english .
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- And i spent my time after college to chill out with my friends like lunch or dinner .
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- And iI spentd my time after college to chilling out with my friends ~~like~~, for example eating lunch or dinner with them.
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- And in the evening im online and i was watching youtube channel looking at interview in english or looking at my favorite actress/actor video in the west or watching a movies i like.
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- And in the evening i'm online and i ~~was~~ watch~~ing~~ youtube channel ~~looking at interview in english or looking at~~either for watching an english interview, watch my favorite actress/actor video in the west, or watch~~ing~~ a movies which i like.
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- ~~And i~~In the evening ~~im online and i was~~, I'm normally online, watching yYoutube ~~channel~~, looking at interviews in eEnglish ~~or looking at~~, watching my favorite actress/actor video ins from the wWest, or ~~watching a~~ movies iI like.
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