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Text from DadaIsmo - English

  • My home, my family

  • I would talk about my first house.
    • It is a little, charming apartment in the centre of Corato (nearly from Bari), a little town in the north of Puglia.
  • But, thinking of the size of my native town, everything is the centre.
    • My family still live here.
    • My flat has one floor, no basement, but five rooms.
    • My favourite is the bedroom, which I used to share with my younger sister before my transfer.
    • Both love music and we have a vinyl collection displayed on a shelf next to a record player.
  • Among them, I framed the most important.
    • For the rest it seems a normal chamber, with warm colour, several poster and paintings, a filled bookcase, some Ikea furniture and two guitars.
    • The living room is the biggest part of the house, full of paintings, four of them of my uncle: he has painted since he was fourteen, and according to me his art is interesting.
    • A particularity of this room is a flexuous wooden bookcase that surrounds the walls.
    • The kitchen, filled with photos and memories, is the place where my mother used to spend half of her time, before enrol herself in a Pilates course.
  • Oh, I'm kidding, she's great.
  • On the other hand, my father plays classic guitar in his bedroom when he's not busy with work.
    • Music is his first hobby.

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