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  • Perseverance

    • How often do you think about future?
    • I don't mean any events that will be.
    • I mean such perseverance which you can forward to change your life.
  • Many people around us don't care about it.
    • Can we approved such behavior?
    • On the one hand - I can't.
    • But on the other hand - lets figure out what means if anybody doesn't care about his (or her) future.
    • It's not always mean that he's not going to build family for example, or that he get drunk everyday.
    • If a man doesn't care about his future means that he go by rails.
    • This rails are representing a circumference.
    • You will finish you life in the same point where you've started.
    • So I mentioned perseverance as one of most valuable qualities that people have to master.
    • Perseverance is your time and strength which will broke your rails and allow you to go where you would like.
  • Hope you've got it.
  • Thanks for your corrections.

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