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    • The love of money is root of all evil

    • Money is very important thing for many people.
    • There are people who can do a lot of bad thing for it.
    • The Apostle Paul said: “The love of money is root of all evil”.
  • What do you think about it?
  • I think that it is not quite true.
    • In suppose greedy people do a lot of crime, but sometimes people haven’t another variant of getting money and do a crime.
  • Usually these people are poor or homeless.
    • For example, Fyodor Dostoevsky wrote a book about poor person who haven’t money for food and he commit a murder.
    • In this story there is very sad ending.
    • In conclusion, I can say that the love of money isn’t good thing.
    • In my opinion, money – it is only piece of paper or metal and there are thing which more important –friendship, love and family.

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