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Testo da mvrkkoen - English

    • Space oddity

    • It was usual summer day.
    • I filled my rocket and then wanted to go to open space.
    • I though that it was a great idea.
    • But.. things did not go according to this plan.
    • There was not enough fuel on my ship.
    • So i needed to stop on the unknown planet.
    • I clothed my helmet on.
    • And went out of spaceship.
    • At once i stambled on white rabbit.
  • He started to mumble something.
    • It was so wierd!
    • But i couldn't hear him, because "White stripes" in my ears where too loud.
    • So i simply followed him...

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English