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Today is a Beautiful Day
- I really like to wake me up with the sun who go through the blinds.
- That makes me happy for all the rest of the day.
- Today is a beautiful day, so I am happy!

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- Today is a Beautiful Day
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Sentence 1
- I really like to wake me up with the sun who go through the blinds.
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- I really like to wake me up with the sun ~~who go~~shining through the blinds.
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Sentence 2
- That makes me happy for all the rest of the day.
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- ~~Tha~~It makes me happy for ~~all~~ the rest of the day.
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Sentence 3
- Today is a beautiful day, so I am happy!
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- Today is a beautiful day, ~~so I am~~ that make me ahappy!
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