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    • I don't Live in Bursa but I want to go.Bursa has a population of 2.740.970.
  • It's the fourth largest city of Turkey with historical beauties.
  • Bursa is located in the Marmara region.It's a city of tourism and has a beautiful sea.Bursa is the UNESCO world heritage candidate.It is the first capital of the Ottomon Empire.
    • There are a lot of mosques, museum and tombs in the city.
  • For example, great mosque, archaeological museum, anatolia cars museum, the green mosque, Atatürk museum, Muradiye complex, Tomb of Yıldırım Beyazıt...
  • Archaeological museum, Turkey is the first archaeological museum.
    • So all seasons comes to tourists.
    • There are very beautiful and bid shopping malls.
  • As for souvenirs, you visit the covered bazaar or the Koza Han an attractive ottoman building with its architectual style and also a centre of silk trade.
    • There are great viems and waterfalls so reminds me of heawen.
  • Also there are mineral-rich Springs and thermal bath.
  • Turkish Karagöz and Hacivat shadow plays borned centuries ago in Bursa and has spreat to all country.Bursa's candied chestnut, peaches, towels sward and shield dance and the gread mountain.
    • Bursa's İskender kebap is very famıus which is unique.
  • Uludağ is the highest mountain of the Marmara region.
  • Uludağ is the largest and most celebrated winter-sport and skiing center in turkey.
  • Bursa has a professional football club.
  • Bursaspor became the champion of Turkey in 2010.
  • Bursa is one of the economically developed cities of Turkey.
    • Agriculture, industry and mining has deveroped.
  • Mining is the fifty province.
    • Summers are warm in winters are cold but every season is beautiful.

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