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    • I am not fluent because in one and half year in London I don't think that you Can be fluent at the end but I have a conversational level and I worked on English cases and I took English lessons in London.
    • Now I have English classes at university and family law class and I have English lesson with an English native speaker.
    • i would like to passe the Toeifl which is an important English exam.
    • When I has been accepted at Paris 1 I sais to myself ok let s try one year but finaly I never go back to Marseille.
    • I was si grateful for having the chance to study in this magnificient school with such skilful teachers.
    • I am also a member of a group of law student.
  • I am their communication manager.
    • I was able to work the exam with online éducation si I decided to travel one year and I moved to London.
  • I had the opportunity to work in an English law office.
    • She let me being présent during meeting with clients.

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    • I am not fluent because in one and half year in London I don't think that you Can be fluent at the end but I have a conversational level and I worked on English cases and I took English lessons in London.
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    • I am not fluent because in one and half year in London I don't think that I don't think that after living in London only year and a half, you Ccan bend up fluent atd in the end, but I have a conversational level ands I worked on English casetopics and I took English lessons in London.
    • I am not fluent because inAfter one and a half years in London, I don't think that you Ccan be fluent at the end but I. However, I do have a good conversational level and I. I have worked on English cases and I took English lessons in London.
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    • Now I have English classes at university and family law class and I have English lesson with an English native speaker.
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    • Now I have English classes at university and a family law class and I have English lessons with an English native speaker.
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    • When I has been accepted at Paris 1 I sais to myself ok let s try one year but finaly I never go back to Marseille.
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    • When I hwas been accepted at Paris 1 I saisd to myself o: "Ok let 's try one year but finaly I've never gobeen back to Marseille.
    • When I hwas been accepted at Paris 1 I saisd to myself ok; "okay let 's try one year", but finaly I never gowent back to Marseille.
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    • I was si grateful for having the chance to study in this magnificient school with such skilful teachers.
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    • I was sio grateful for having the chance to study in this magnificient school with such skilful teachers.
    • I was sio grateful for having the chance to study in thisa magnificient school with such skillful teachers.
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    • I was able to work the exam with online éducation si I decided to travel one year and I moved to London.
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    • I was able to work towards the exam with online éeducation si. Then I decided to travel for one year and I moved to London.
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