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    • Hello!

  • My name is Eva and I am 19 years old.
  • I live with my family on a farm in federal state Upper Austria in the little city Linz.
    • Now I want to introduce you my family.
    • There is my older sister Kerstin, my little brother Christoph, my mum Margarita and my dad Josef.
    • The relationship to my family is very close for that reason I really like to do spend time with them.
    • One thing that I really like is driving with the car.
    • I do have my driving licence know for about 1 year and have collect until now a lot of experience, while for example driving with my family around in Austria to do such amazing sings like water rafting in Salzburg.
    • I am sitting here at one of my favorite places in summer.
    • I often came her with my friends and go swimming or just having fun and we talk and discuss the world the whole day.
    • I also have a preference for sport for that reason I show you now a few of my favorite kind of sport.
  • VIDEO An important question is “Why I want to be an au pair?” and I am pleased to answer it.
    • Actually, I wanted to be an au pair since I was 14.
    • Now, it´s the time to make this dream came true.
  • I love children.
    • Especially when I can explore the world with them together.
    • When I am in America I don´t want to be just the babysitter, I want to be a member of the family like a bigger sister to the kids.
    • I hope that they want to ask me for advice and trust me because for this are bigger sisters for.
    • I also want to get to know them American life style and see the amazing sights and the big citys there.
    • I hope you will travel with me or at least support me to see a little part of the wonderful America.
  • The last important reason why I want to be an au pair is that I want to improve my English and study at an American university.
    • I think that this year could be the year of my life.
  • So now, I want to tell you about my experience with children.
    • Since I was 9 years old I look after my little cousin Enya.
  • She is the reason why I started babysitting.
    • She impresses me every time I do something with her that I realized that children are our future.
    • I am actually a happy person but when I am with kid’s it´s another kind of happiness.
    • The laugh of a children goes directly into the heart and you will never forget it.
    • I have never took a picture of Franka’s laugh when she doing something she actually isn´t allowed to do.
    • The problem is that this smile makes everything gone and you can´t stay seriously; you just have to laugh with her.
    • I hope you could get with this short video a impression of me and that you as curios as I am to finally meeting you, my hopefully future host family.

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    • There is my older sister Kerstin, my little brother Christoph, my mum Margarita and my dad Josef.
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    • ThereKerstin is my older sister Kerstin,, Christoph is my little brother Christoph, my mum, Margarita andis my dad Josefmother and Josef is my father.
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    • The relationship to my family is very close for that reason I really like to do spend time with them.
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    • ThWe arelationship to my family is very close for that reason very close to each other because I really like to do spend time with them.
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    • ThI have a very close relationship towith my family is very close f. For thatis reason I really like to do spend my time with them.
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    • I do have my driving licence know for about 1 year and have collect until now a lot of experience, while for example driving with my family around in Austria to do such amazing sings like water rafting in Salzburg.
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    • I do've haved my driving licence know for about 1 year and have collect until nowgained a lot of experience, so far while for example driving with my family around in Austria to do such amazing sthings like water rafting in Salzburg.
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    • I do have had my driving licence know for about 1one year and have collect until nowgained a lot of experience, so far while for example driving with my family around in Austria to do such amazing sthings like water rafting in Salzburg.
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    • I often came her with my friends and go swimming or just having fun and we talk and discuss the world the whole day.
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    • I often caome here with my friends and go swimming or just havinge fun and we talk and discuss the world the whole day.
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    • I often caome here with my friends and go swimming or just havinge fun and w. We talk and discuss about the world the wholentire day.
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    • I also have a preference for sport for that reason I show you now a few of my favorite kind of sport.
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    • I also have a preference for sport, for that reason I show you now a few ofwill now tell you about my favorite kind of sports.
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    • When I am in America I don´t want to be just the babysitter, I want to be a member of the family like a bigger sister to the kids.
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    • When I am'll be in America I dwon´t want to be just the babysitter, I'll want to be a member of the family like a bigger sister to the kids.
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    • When I a'm in America I don´t want to be just be the babysitter, I want to be a member of the family like a bigger sister to the kids.
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    • I hope that they want to ask me for advice and trust me because for this are bigger sisters for.
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    • I hope that they want to'll ask me for advice and trust me because for this are bigger sisters for.
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    • I hope that they want toey ask me for advice and trust me, because for this arethat is what bigger sisters are for.
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    • I also want to get to know them American life style and see the amazing sights and the big citys there.
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    • I also want to get to know them American life style with their help and see the amazing sights and the big citys there.
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    • I also want to get to know them American life style and see the amazing sights and the big city's there.
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    • I hope you will travel with me or at least support me to see a little part of the wonderful America.
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    • I hope you will travel with me or at least support me to see a little part of the wonderful America I am going to.
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    • The last important reason why I want to be an au pair is that I want to improve my English and study at an American university.
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    • I have never took a picture of Franka’s laugh when she doing something she actually isn´t allowed to do.
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    • I have never took a picture of Franka’s laughter when she was doing something she actually isn´'t allowed to do.
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    • I have never tookaken a picture of Franka’s laugh when she was doing something she actually isn´t allowed to do.
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    • The problem is that this smile makes everything gone and you can´t stay seriously; you just have to laugh with her.
      투표하세요!
    • The problem is that this smile makes everything gone and you can´t stay seriously; you just have to laugh with her.
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    • The problem is that thisher smile makes everything gone away and you can´t stay no longer remain seriously; y. You just have to laugh with her.
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    • I hope you could get with this short video a impression of me and that you as curios as I am to finally meeting you, my hopefully future host family.
      투표하세요!
    • I hope you could get an impression of me with this short video a impression of me and that you are as curious as I am to finally meeting you, my hopefully future host family. ¶
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    • I hope you could get with this short video a impression of meget a good impression of me in this short video and that you are as curious as I am to finally meeting you, my h. Hopefully you will be my future host family. ¶
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