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    • what's the essence of woman?

    • once there was a man, who asked me: what the woman is !! and I said : she is a sheet made of glass, so clear that you can see inside her if you wipe her so gently.
    • you will increase her glitter and you will see yourself in her, as like she was hiding your picture inside her in shyness.
    • and if you break her once, it will be hard to collect her pieces, and even after you glue her pieces together, the scars will be clear that if you pass your hand on it you will hurt yourself.

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    • once there was a man, who asked me: what the woman is !! and I said : she is a sheet made of glass, so clear that you can see inside her if you wipe her so gently.
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    • oOnce there was a man, who asked me: what the womaen is !!are, and I said : sthe is ay are sheets made of glass, so clear that you can see inside therm if you wipe ther som gently.
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    • oOnce there was a man, who asked me: what the a woman is !! and! I said :, she is like a sheet made of glass, so clear that you can see inside herright through her and if you wipe her so gently.
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    • and if you break her once, it will be hard to collect her pieces, and even after you glue her pieces together, the scars will be clear that if you pass your hand on it you will hurt yourself.
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    • ¶aAnd if you break therm once, it will be hard to collect their pieces, and even after you glue their pieces together, the scars will be so clear that if you pass your hand on ithem you will hurt yourself.
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    • ¶and iIf you break her once, it will be hard to collect her pieces back together, and even after you glue her pieces together, the scars will be clear. So much so that if you pass your hand on itthrough you will hurt yourself.
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