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  • help me please

    • Living alone isn't a bad idea.I love to live alone because you live a happy and peaceful.Firstly I think it is to be free to live alone.I listen to want music moreover aloud.You go want place and want time.
  • Secondly there is only one rule at home.
  • We are living more organized and stress-free.Thus you'll find everything easily.For example I don't like to take orders.So I put my own rule.In fact, there isn't union give strangth.As I say, you have regularly a home.
  • I live like a king.
  • Most important, you live in a quiet.
    • There aren't people who make noise.
    • Phones will not ring.
    • By the way, you aren't arguing with anybody.I don't like to discuss.
  • The only I'm simple explaining why I'm right but still I don't be drowned by nobody thoughtless screaming.
    • So better to spend time alone but sometimes boring.
  • Many people don't like lonelines and I'm happy just us alone.

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