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    • I remember something very scary in my childhood, that event has changed all of the my fears,so much that I still feel them today.
    • If I found myself at the dark room alone, I am afraid.
    • It had happened 4 years ago when I together whit my family went to my grandmother in the small village of Romania.
    • I was eleven years old.As a child I was told that the ghosts and devils exist .I was frightened of that but not so much that I couldn't tell a story the others,for example to my little nephew.
  • I loved scaring the others to death,younger than me,I don't why,for me is metter (important)that I wasn't scare .A procedure by my grandmother always was the same,speaking,eating cakes,visiting grave of my grandfather which I've never seen in my life...
  • We were going to the cemetery,my family and my nephew,and I began with the stories at the especially(particular)place where they are sound more scary.
  • I told to my nephew:do you know if you whistle on the cemetery loudly the ghosts will come,he was smiling with scare,as we were going further and further I went on whit stories,suddenly he began crying and screaming, when my mother realized that he had been screaming because of me,she came and give me a slap.
  • The same day we were driving to home by a car,trip was quiet,everything were nice around us,I fell asleep like a baby about 12 PM.

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    • I remember something very scary in my childhood, that event has changed all of the my fears,so much that I still feel them today.
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    • I remember something very scaryscarrying was happened in my childhood, t. That event has changed all of the my fears,me so much that I still can feel them todayit until now.
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  • Sentence 4
    • I was eleven years old.As a child I was told that the ghosts and devils exist .I was frightened of that but not so much that I couldn't tell a story the others,for example to my little nephew.
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    • I was eleven years old. As a child I was told that the ghosts and devils exist.I was frightened of that but not so much that I couldn't tell a story the others,for examplethe story to my little nephew.
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  • Sentence 5
    • I loved scaring the others to death,younger than me,I don't why,for me is metter (important)that I wasn't scare .A procedure by my grandmother always was the same,speaking,eating cakes,visiting grave of my grandfather which I've never seen in my life...
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  • Sentence 6
    • We were going to the cemetery,my family and my nephew,and I began with the stories at the especially(particular)place where they are sound more scary.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • I told to my nephew:do you know if you whistle on the cemetery loudly the ghosts will come,he was smiling with scare,as we were going further and further I went on whit stories,suddenly he began crying and screaming, when my mother realized that he had been screaming because of me,she came and give me a slap.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • The same day we were driving to home by a car,trip was quiet,everything were nice around us,I fell asleep like a baby about 12 PM.
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