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  • what's the essence of woman?

    • once there was a man, who asked me: what's the essence of woman? and I said : she is a sheet of glass, so clear that you can see inside her if you wipe her so gently.
  • you will increase her glitter and you will see yourself in her, as like she was hiding your picture inside her in abash.
  • and if you break her once, it will be hard to collect her pieces, and even after you glue her pieces together, the scars will be clear that if you passed your hand on it you will hurt yourself. be careful

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    • once there was a man, who asked me: what's the essence of woman? and I said : she is a sheet of glass, so clear that you can see inside her if you wipe her so gently.
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    • once there was a man, who asked me: what's the essence of a woman? and I said : she is a sheet of glass, so clear that you can see inside her if you wipe her so gently.
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    • you will increase her glitter and you will see yourself in her, as like she was hiding your picture inside her in abash.
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    • and if you break her once, it will be hard to collect her pieces, and even after you glue her pieces together, the scars will be clear that if you passed your hand on it you will hurt yourself. be careful
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