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    • I want to tell about myself.So..I'm from town which situated in the south of Russia.I'm art-student.My English is not too bad,I hope.I want to have a travel this summer.My obsession is a beautiful sky and I can't help to take a picture it.I hope in the future I'll more traveling.I like minimalism.I like reading a books.my favourite artist is Salvatore Dali.His works so emotional,philosophical,bright and weird.There are a lot of colors in it.In my opinion this person is genius.My favourite actress is Emma Watson.I find so interesting British,German,Italian and Japanese culture.I can talk about myself for so long,but I think I should stopping. See you later!
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    • I want to tell about myself.So..I'm from town which situated in the south of Russia.I'm art-student.My English is not too bad,I hope.I want to have a travel this summer.My obsession is a beautiful sky and I can't help to take a picture it.I hope in the future I'll more traveling.I like minimalism.I like reading a books.my favourite artist is Salvatore Dali.His works so emotional,philosophical,bright and weird.There are a lot of colors in it.In my opinion this person is genius.My favourite actress is Emma Watson.I find so interesting British,German,Italian and Japanese culture.I can talk about myself for so long,but I think I should stopping. See you later!
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    • I want to tell about myself.So.. I'm from a town which situated in the south of Russia. I'm an art- student. My English is not too bad, I hope. I want to have a travel this summer.My I am obsession ised with a beautiful sky and I can't help to take aing pictures of it.I hope in the future I'll more traveling more.I like minimalism.I like reading a books.my favourite artist is Salvatore Dali.His work is so emotional,philosophical,bright and weird.There are a lot of colors in it.In my opinion this person is a genius.My favourite actress is Emma Watson.I find so interesting British,German,Italian and Japanese cultures to be interesting.I can talk about myself for so long,but I think I should stopping. See you later!
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    • I want to tell you about myself.So..I'm I came from a town which situis located in the south part of Russia. I'm an art- student. My English is not too bad, I hope. I want to have ago travel this summer.My I am obsession is aed with beautiful sky and I can't help to take a picture of it. I hope in the future I'll more traveling.I could travel more in the future. I like minimalism. I like reading a books.m My favourite artist is Salvatore Dali. His works were so emotional, philosophical, bright and weird. There are a lot of colors in it. In my opinion this person is a genius.My favourite actress is Emma Watson. I find so interesting British, German, Italian and Japanese culture. are interesting. I can talk about myself for so long, but I think I should stopping. See you later!
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