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    • I dont know how learn english now maybe people give advice my self i will really love for help because i hope a good job after i can go school again people often talk that the money is important i had ever thought same but i saw a close my friend who is mannger at foreign company she has a good imcome but she dont feel lucky such as family, love and health i think that if we have a good something and we will lose another something it is right or wrong final i advice her you do best all yourself and you should look lucid decision if you agree all problem which they need from you i think that how much money it will lost final you still work hard and save again after it make end again you should love and enjoy more yourself like you know people run about money when you feel weak health also feel depress it is meaning when you have money but you dont have a good health for enjoy because you only live a time you let live best which you can we can guess how can our life next future thus you should give up which make problem or diffcult solution.

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    • I dont know how learn english now maybe people give advice my self i will really love for help because i hope a good job after i can go school again people often talk that the money is important i had ever thought same but i saw a close my friend who is mannger at foreign company she has a good imcome but she dont feel lucky such as family, love and health i think that if we have a good something and we will lose another something it is right or wrong final i advice her you do best all yourself and you should look lucid decision if you agree all problem which they need from you i think that how much money it will lost final you still work hard and save again after it make end again you should love and enjoy more yourself like you know people run about money when you feel weak health also feel depress it is meaning when you have money but you dont have a good health for enjoy because you only live a time you let live best which you can we can guess how can our life next future thus you should give up which make problem or diffcult solution.
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