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- My trip in Miami
Hi!
My name is Giovanni and I'm 18.
- I just want to tell you something about my trip in Miami.
I was in Miami two weeks ago.
I stayed there for three days, and then I took the cruise for the Caribbean Sea: that was fantastic!
- I visited Mexico, Honduras, Belize and Cayman Islands.
That was a great experience. Bye!

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- My trip in Miami
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- Hi!
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- My name is Giovanni and I'm 18.
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- I just want to tell you something about my trip in Miami.
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- I just want to tell you something about my trip into Miami.
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- I was in Miami two weeks ago.
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- I stayed there for three days, and then I took the cruise for the Caribbean Sea: that was fantastic!
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- I visited Mexico, Honduras, Belize and Cayman Islands.
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- That was a great experience. Bye!
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