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Text from clem44 - English

    • An innovation

    • We all use applications every day that make easier our lives.
  • That’s why I want to join the creation of new application making things easier.
  • One day, when my computer shut down I went on a forum to explain my problem but it was extremely difficult without pictures.
  • It’s like that the idea of a new application crossed my mind.
  • My application would lies in the fact that when somebody has a problem for example he does not know how to clear its dirty marble very difficult to make it clean so this man take a picture of his marble and post it in the application.
  • Helpers would helped him advising him, for example, putting soap.
  • Another example maybe more concrete is a woman this time who has bought a TV decoder but she does not know how to connect it to her TV so as simple as it appears she takes one picture of the back of her TV another of the back of the decoder and post them on the application.
  • Then a specialist in this area would help her making arrows on the picture.
  • So then for the women a few minutes after, she would be able to connect a decoder to the TV following the advices of the specialist.
  • The world enter now in the connected world so we do not have to call a computer scientist who would take around 80€ just to connect the decoder to TV whereas it’s very easy … Indeed, this app will first make your life easier but moreover she will save money so that’s a great innovation!!! :D

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • One day, when my computer shut down I went on a forum to explain my problem but it was extremely difficult without pictures.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • My application would lies in the fact that when somebody has a problem for example he does not know how to clear its dirty marble very difficult to make it clean so this man take a picture of his marble and post it in the application.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • Another example maybe more concrete is a woman this time who has bought a TV decoder but she does not know how to connect it to her TV so as simple as it appears she takes one picture of the back of her TV another of the back of the decoder and post them on the application.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • So then for the women a few minutes after, she would be able to connect a decoder to the TV following the advices of the specialist.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • The world enter now in the connected world so we do not have to call a computer scientist who would take around 80€ just to connect the decoder to TV whereas it’s very easy … Indeed, this app will first make your life easier but moreover she will save money so that’s a great innovation!!! :D
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10