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Text from Rhanterr - English

    • ¡Hello, this is my fist time here!

    • Yesterday i had a party!
    • (I have a lot of problems writting... so, let's try ) I have two friends like a sisters and yesterday we wanted to celebrate the finish of exams.
    • But i needed go to the CAA (Center of autoacess, where i practice and do homework of my english class), Eli needed clean her house and take a shower and Nubia needed call to her parents to ask for a permission to stay in my house.
    • (Because she lives in a shared house and need a special permission to don't come to sleep) After we do what we want, we located in a mall.
    • And buy a lot of food (like pasta, ice cream, milk, cookies, strawberries, apples etc.) And go to my house!
    • When we arrived, eli start to cooking when Nubia and I play the stereo and star to dance!
    • After we eat the most delicious pasta in the world we up to the bed and conect the laptop to the T.V and start to search for a movie!
    • We found one and we enjoy it.
    • We go to sleep past the 6 am.
    • We have a nice night! :)

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English