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    • At this moment I work as a programmer and technical support at the company «Alfa Parfume».
  • The company is based in Odessa, Ukraine.
  • It supplies the perfumes to Ukraine.
  • During my work here my primary goals are directed towards understanding the right approach to create an automated system, tables and reports that will be convenient and effective for users of different professions - from an accountant to a warehouse worker.
  • Also I provide phone support and work in a supporting system osTicket.
    • My PhD studies before in the IT Department at the Odessa State Academy of Refrigeration (OSAR), Ukraine, provided me with a comprehensive introduction to the fascinating world of experimental and theoretical Information about creating expert systems.
    • During my work at OSAR (8 years) I have developed informational, automated, expert systems and subsystems: • Solving problems of nutrition at the relaxation period of the patient • Automated subsystem complex analysis for nail care • Automated subsystem diagnostics and prevention of hair hygiene • Automated system of "Blood Bank" • Website Designing for CAD-department • Automated subsystem "Navigator of fisherman" • Intelligent assistant of artist makeup • Subsystem selection of accessories for car tuning • Subsystem of ordering food • Automated subsystem creation schemes for equipment installation in concert halls.
    • During my diverse research studies I have gained the ability to quickly familiarize myself with new topics and develop my own research ideas.
  • The tasks solved during my research career have provided me with the ability to deal with scientific and technical problems independently, thoroughly and successfully.
    • I believe that my considerable expertise in creation of systems, as well as my experience in working effectively in multi-national and multi-disciplinary environments, provides me with many skills necessary for desired positions.

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    • During my work here my primary goals are directed towards understanding the right approach to create an automated system, tables and reports that will be convenient and effective for users of different professions - from an accountant to a warehouse worker.
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    • My PhD studies before in the IT Department at the Odessa State Academy of Refrigeration (OSAR), Ukraine, provided me with a comprehensive introduction to the fascinating world of experimental and theoretical Information about creating expert systems.
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    • My previous PhD studies before in the IT Department at the Odessa State Academy of Refrigeration (OSAR), Ukraine, provided me with a comprehensive introduction to the fascinating world of experimental and theoretical Information aboutrequired in creating expert systems.
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    • During my work at OSAR (8 years) I have developed informational, automated, expert systems and subsystems: • Solving problems of nutrition at the relaxation period of the patient • Automated subsystem complex analysis for nail care • Automated subsystem diagnostics and prevention of hair hygiene • Automated system of "Blood Bank" • Website Designing for CAD-department • Automated subsystem "Navigator of fisherman" • Intelligent assistant of artist makeup • Subsystem selection of accessories for car tuning • Subsystem of ordering food • Automated subsystem creation schemes for equipment installation in concert halls.
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    • During my work at OSAR (8 years) I have developed informational, automated, expert systems and subsystems:¶• Solving problems of nutrition atduring the relaxation period of thecovery stage of patients.¶• Automated subsystem for complex analysis for nail care.¶• Automated subsystem for diagnostics and prevention of hair hygiene problems.¶• Automated system of "Blood Bank" system.¶• Website Designing for the CAD-department.¶• Automated subsystem "Navigator of fisherman".¶• Intelligent assistant of artist makeupfor makeup artists.¶• Subsystem for the selection of accessories for car tuning¶• Subsystem ofor ordering food.¶• Automated subsystem creation schemes for equipment installation in concert halls.
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    • During my diverse research studies I have gained the ability to quickly familiarize myself with new topics and develop my own research ideas.
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    • During my diverse research studies I have gained the ability to quickly familiarizse myself with new topics and develop my own research ideas.
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    • The tasks solved during my research career have provided me with the ability to deal with scientific and technical problems independently, thoroughly and successfully.
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    • I believe that my considerable expertise in creation of systems, as well as my experience in working effectively in multi-national and multi-disciplinary environments, provides me with many skills necessary for desired positions.
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    • I believe that my considerable expertise in creation of systems, as well as my experience in working effectively in multi-national and multi-disciplinary environments, provides me with manydesired skills necessary for desiredmany positions.
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