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    • visit for a twins

    • today i visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and female they are very lovely, when my son one old year saw them he was happy and he smile but they have not the firstname because in her culture it is after nine days for male or seven for female that her parents can give them a first name in a ceremony.

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    • today i visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and female they are very lovely, when my son one old year saw them he was happy and he smile but they have not the firstname because in her culture it is after nine days for male or seven for female that her parents can give them a first name in a ceremony.
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    • tToday i, I and my son visited myour neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and.His wife gave birth twin.One of them was male and the other one was female t.They awere veryso lovely, when my son one old. My son who is one year old saw them h. He was happy and he smile bud at they have not the firstname because in m. However, they are not named yet due to their culture it is after nine days for male or. Their parents will give name to them in seven for female that her parents can give them a first name innine days with a ceremony. ¶
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    • tToday iI visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and female t. They just had a twins, a boy and a girl. They awere veryso lovely, w. When my son one old yearone-year-old son saw them, he was happy and he smile bd. But tThey have n't got the firstname because in ir names due to their culture it is after nine days for male or seven for female that her parents can give them a first name. Their parents will give them name after seven days for the boy and nine days for the girl in a ceremony.
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    • today iI visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and females they just had twins, a boy and a girl they awere very lovely, when my son one old year saw them he wase year old son was very happy and he smile but they have not the firstnamed when he saw them but they haven't named them yet because in their culture it isthe parents name their children after nine days for malea boy or seven for female that her parents can give them a first namegirl in a ceremony. ¶
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