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  • Please, Help!

  • As a teenager I can confidently say that in Minsk there are not many places where you can have a lot of fun.
  • That is why I would like to open an art gallery.
  • There are a lot of artists who can agree to exhibit their work for free.
    • Entering will be cheap (15,000 bel. rubles), and when the place become popular, I'm going to open cafe & bookstore on the second floor, where in the evenings can be arranged lectures, poetry readings, or just meeting with interesting people.
  • A bookstore and cafe gives bookworms the opportunity to purchase their favorite titles, discover new books, and enjoy a beverage and snack.
    • Target audience - students and high school pupils.
    • The opening of the gallery does not require huge investments, but creating a café & bookstore is very expensive, so I think without sponsor's it will be hard.
    • The stress is going be on the cafe, so there will be selling only unusual books, which hard to buy in a common bookstore.
  • A bookstore and cafe will likely take up a large amount of space.
    • And the art gallery's location should be visible, easy to get to, and have enough interior space to house several collections of art.
    • So, I think that the best option is to rent whole building I have not chosen a style of the interior yet, but most likely it will be the style of 60's or 90's. Thanks!!!

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    • Entering will be cheap (15,000 bel. rubles), and when the place become popular, I'm going to open cafe & bookstore on the second floor, where in the evenings can be arranged lectures, poetry readings, or just meeting with interesting people.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Entering will be cheap (15,000 bel. rubles), and when the place becomes popular, I'm going to open cafe & bookstore on the second floor, where in the evenings can be arranged lectures, poetry readings, or just meetings with interesting people can be arranged in the evenings.
      direnndirenn profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • A bookstore and cafe gives bookworms the opportunity to purchase their favorite titles, discover new books, and enjoy a beverage and snack.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
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    • The opening of the gallery does not require huge investments, but creating a café & bookstore is very expensive, so I think without sponsor's it will be hard.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • The opening of the gallery does not require huge investments, but creating a café & bookstore is very expensive, so I think without sponsor's it will be hard.
      direnndirenn profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • And the art gallery's location should be visible, easy to get to, and have enough interior space to house several collections of art.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • And the art gallery's location should be visible, easy to get to, and have enough interior space to house several collections of art.
      direnndirenn profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
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    • So, I think that the best option is to rent whole building I have not chosen a style of the interior yet, but most likely it will be the style of 60's or 90's. Thanks!!!
      赶紧投票吧！
    • So, I think that the best option is to rent whole building, but¶I have not chosen a style of the interior yet, but most l. Likely it will be the style of 60's or 90's. Thanks!!!
      direnndirenn profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11