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Hello Jo!
You remember what you ask me "when I come to your house?".I want to come to you by train.
If you can catch me at 9:00 o'clock tomorrow. have you got an Ipad?
I whant to play with you together.

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句子 1
- Hello Jo!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- You remember what you ask me "when I come to your house?".I want to come to you by train.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If you can catch me at 9:00 o'clock tomorrow. have you got an Ipad?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I whant to play with you together.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4