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The Graph
Could you show me how to express this idea in another way?
- The graph compares the proportion of people in three countries who aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040

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- Could you show me how to express this idea in another way?
  Проголосуй сейчас!
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- The graph compares the proportion of people in three countries who aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040
  Проголосуй сейчас!
- Theis graph compares the proportion of ~~people in three countries who aged 65 and over between~~the population aged 65 and over, from three countries, between the years of 1940 and 2040.
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