Corrections

A problem in a society

• In my opinion, the most problem in a society is domestic violence.

• The reason for this is we are living in the patriarchal society.

• The young girls and the women are living under the pressure of society.

• On the other hand, the boys and the men are doing everythin freely.

• However, our education system isn't good and not enough for human relationship.

• The children are studying in like a race.

• They don't receive sex education.

• Economic insufficiency is a big problem also for all families.

• The most reason of the fights for the pairs is economic insufficiency.

• They fights when they don't eran money enough and usually the husband wins this fight through violence.

• Domestic violence become unavoidable when we add all of them reasons.