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  • Essay. Please, Help!

  • Nowadays there are numerous different youth organisations all over the world.
  • Some of them were started by young people themselves or by interested adults.
  • Youth organisations may operate on a local, national, or even international level.
  • Each group has their own aims and goals.
    • Usually, these organisation directed on development of personality, helping needy people or environment.
    • And in my opinion, spending time in youth organisation is a better option, than wasting time on the Internet, for example.
    • First of all, joining a volunteer community can show young people other, bad sight of life, like poverty or illnesses.
    • This type of experience will help to grow up and become more responsable and careful.
    • Secondly, being part of a group can help young people develop important personal and interpersonal skills.
    • These include the ability to think critically and solve problems, and the assumption of personal and group responsibility.
    • What is more, It can help reduce the risk of becoming involved in unsafe activities, such as using drugs and alcohol.
  • Being involved in community activities has been shown to be a protective factor that helps young people to make healthy choices.
  • But on the other hand, I believe that joining these groups should be voluntary.
    • For example the BRSM is not a totally volunteer organization, because students became under certain pressure if you refuse join it.
    • To sum up, joining a youth organisation will full fill your life.
    • Also it can help young people gain self-confidence and self-esteem.
  • And I agree that youth organisations can have a tremendous positive impact on the lives of youth.

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