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- Just Hi!
- Hello guys, My name is Ola , and u can call me lo :D..
- I'm 24 years old Egyptian girl.
- And I'd love to make too many friends to share cultures, experiences and of course to learn languages together ..

OlaazMarch 2013100% GOOD (2 votes)
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- Just Hi!
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- ~~Just~~ Hi!
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- Hello guys, My name is Ola , and u can call me lo :D..
  투표하세요!
- Hello guys, ¶My name is Ola , ~~and~~ but you can call me lo. :D..
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- I'm 24 years old Egyptian girl.
  투표하세요!
- I'm 24 years old Egyptian girl.
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- I'm a 24 years old Egyptian girl.
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- And I'd love to make too many friends to share cultures, experiences and of course to learn languages together ..
  투표하세요!
- And I'd love to make ~~too~~ many friends to share cultures, experiences, and of course to learn languages together .. ¶
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- And I'd love to make ~~too~~ many friends to share our cultures, experiences, and of course to learn languages together .. .¶
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