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    • Would you prefer to live in a monoculture or a multi-racial soc

    • I prefer to live in a multi racial society because every country needs different people with different knowledge’s for work.
    • For example worker from Asia have much more knowledge in technics than people from other countries like India and so if they work together maybe in Germany they can help each other.
  • The Asian man can control the robots and the man from India can check the cotton for our clothes.
    • Also an important point for a multi-racial society is that people who live in another country always involve new tradition there.
    • So the Indian man bring some tradition from India and the Asian man bring some tradition from Asia to Germany and the Germans have their own rite and society so they can mix up all the traditions and learn much from the other countries and people.
    • Maybe they learn also something about the religion traditions from the others.
    • That’s my opinion about live in a multi racial society.
    • (it's only an example not a racism statement please don't misapprehend it thank you)

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    • I prefer to live in a multi racial society because every country needs different people with different knowledge’s for work.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I prefer to liveliving in a multi racial society because every country needs different people with different knowledge’skills for the workplace.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • For example worker from Asia have much more knowledge in technics than people from other countries like India and so if they work together maybe in Germany they can help each other.
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    • For example, workers from East Asia have much more knowledge in technicsexpertise in the field of technology than people from other countries like India and so. Maybe if they work together maybe in Germany, they can help each other.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • Also an important point for a multi-racial society is that people who live in another country always involve new tradition there.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Also, an important point forfeature of a multi-racial society is that people who live in another countrythe immigrants always involvebring new tradition theres to the host country.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • So the Indian man bring some tradition from India and the Asian man bring some tradition from Asia to Germany and the Germans have their own rite and society so they can mix up all the traditions and learn much from the other countries and people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • So the Indian man bring someand Asian workers could bring traditions from India and the Asian man bring some tradition from Asiatheir native countries to Germany and, where the Germans already have their own ritetraditions and society so. Therefore, they can mix up all the traditions and learn much frommore about the other person's countriesy and people.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
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