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    • Since I was little I have watched TV, so advertising has occupied a little part of my childhood.
    • For me, watching a movie at TV implies to bear hundreds of adverts that usually interrupts the most interesting part of the movie.
    • It can be irritating, but after so many years it has become something ordinary, up to the point that in cases of truly boredom I can distract myself watching ads.
    • Most of the time, I ignore advertising.
    • The principal reason is because I believe that it can't show me anything I really need.
    • Actually, If I watch ads is because there are some of them which are funny, but the majority of ads don't affect my consumption habits.
    • To be honest, the only type of publicity that interests me is the film trailers, and I use to watch them to get informed about a film and to decide if it is worth the effort to pay for it at the cinema.
    • But I have to recognise that the world of advertising is an art, and there are some publicists who are able to get across their message, moving the consumers or making them laugh in only a few seconds.

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    • For me, watching a movie at TV implies to bear hundreds of adverts that usually interrupts the most interesting part of the movie.
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    • For me, watching a movie at TV implies to bear hundreds of adverts that usuallyThe worse part about tv advertisements is that it tends to interrupts the most interesting parts of thea movie.
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    • For me, watching a movie aton TV impliesmeans having to bear hundreds of adverts that usually interrupts the most interesting part of the movie.
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    • It can be irritating, but after so many years it has become something ordinary, up to the point that in cases of truly boredom I can distract myself watching ads.
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    • It can be irritating, but aft's a bother so many years it has become something ordinary, up to the point that in cases of truly boredom I can distract myself watching adsme but it took a while for me to get used to it.
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    • It can be irritating, but after so many years it has become something ordinary, up to the point that, in cases of trulye boredom, I can distract myself by watching ads.
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    • Actually, If I watch ads is because there are some of them which are funny, but the majority of ads don't affect my consumption habits.
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    • Actually, If I watch adswhen I do watch them, it is because there are some of them which are funny, b. But the majority of ads don't affect my consumption habits.
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    • To be honest, the only type of publicity that interests me is the film trailers, and I use to watch them to get informed about a film and to decide if it is worth the effort to pay for it at the cinema.
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    • To be honest, the only type of publicity that interests me is thare film trailers, and I used to watch them to get informed about a film and to decide ifwhether it iwas worth the effort to pay for it at the cinema.
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    • But I have to recognise that the world of advertising is an art, and there are some publicists who are able to get across their message, moving the consumers or making them laugh in only a few seconds.
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    • But I have to recognisze that the world of advertising is an art, and that there are some publicists who are able to get across their message, across by moving the consumers or making them laugh in only a few seconds.
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